My First Free Site! Please Come And tell me what you think about it :D
 

Hi!! :D
This is my first free site:
Babes_anal_pleasure

please if you can tell me:
do you think something is wrong?
do you think that all the recips i put will accept me?
is the domain ok?
what you think about the design?
is there any way i can make it better?
is it ok for a anal freesite? or it should have diferent colors/design/etc ?
the banners?

Thanks SO much for your support and help :D :D :D :D

Took a quick look...
Looks decent but you have your ads opening in a new window and most places don't allow anything to open new windows.

Thanks so much Cleo!, I will do my best to fix that, i dint know they did.
Edit: Fixed ! :D

I think the fact that you're using a freehost will be a problem.

Also sub-domains tend not to be accepted.

so by now the problems would be about the hosting.. :( the fact is that i dont have any credit card and this free hosting maybe will make my first sale so i can buy a domain / host... what you think i should do?

thanks so much again! you are helping me so much :D thx!

Much of the text is a little too big, almost overwhelming. The colors are awful bright, could distract from your ads. Your ads, those types of banners won't pull crap for clicks, you'd be wasting your time if you made sites like that, very little would get to the sponsor to buy. That type and size of banner hasn't pulled clicks for a long time now.

As said the hosting and sub domains will cause you trouble getting listed. Do you have a debit card, they usually work like a credit card. Also some hosts use to take mail in payments, unless your overseas.

Guti, I'm not a major player in the XXX world, but I have a few tips for you...first one is get a real host...maybe even a reseller account if you intend to add more sites...a reseller account will enable you to have better control over each site and it's only like $20 a month for UNLIMITED domains...maybe even cheaper...the real charge will be in domain names...PM me if you need some good referrals...comments about your sites would be one main one which is why would you have ads for Ebony sites on galleries with white chicks? A basic concept would be for you to have ads that match the content because you figure the person is even entertaining the site because they see something they like...but then try to sell them the opposite is not productive...just my opinion...food for thought and something to consider...

ronnie:
Thanks SO much man, i will make my freesite again, much more effort and time, but as you said, i know i have to do it if i want to sell something, thats te idea.
About the hosting... My banners are so bad because i picked them from the free hosting company wich is spacash, they have those ugly banners, and they dont have any banners with white girls that suit my site (thats so ...)
easymama:
Thanks you too man, your advise is wise, the banners as what i'm pretending to sell, should be the same category that the site, but i couldn't find any banner that suit those Galleries in the sponsor, i choose that sponsor because of the free host...
i dont have those $20, i mean i have them, but no way to pay them, no credit card and i'm far away...

Where you at? Sign up for bangbros or nastydollars which convert real well and give you free hosting for THEIR galleries... or some other affiliate program that pays out via epassporte...epassporte is a visa card and a good deal. Then get a site and have it paid automatically when billing is due, once you start making sales. You gotta get away from that free stuff...you have to bluff your professionalism the best you can when your resources are limited.. =) best of luck to you...

Thanks again easymama! :D
so your advise is to start making some money with galleries then come back to freesites?
Thats true, the professionalism, is the key, i will do my best.
Good luck you too!! :D

Here is the update with some of the changes that ronnie suggested:
Babes_anal_pleasure

Thanks Again guys! you are helping me so much!
i keep working on it...

your free site looks fine for me, but you really need to get real host.
Good Luck

:( i really need a host, but i have no idea of how to buy one now... :( well here is another freesite i made:
Teeny_Love_It_Deeply
Would you mind telling me what you think about it, and if you think it will be accepted in those LL?

Thanks so much !

[quote=guti;351882]Teeny_Love_It_Deeply

On the index page: Quite a few grammatical errors. "Cum inside and feel those anus for yourself" should be "Cum inside and feel this anus for yourself"

"This brown beauties just love a cock in their anus..." should be "These brown beauties..."

"myslef" should be "myself"

"They are using their anus like a pumping machine to take out that semen away" the plural for "anus" is "anuses" which sounds weird. Might say "they are using their butt holes...." Also, "to take out that semen away" Not sure on this one but it just doesn't sound right. Maybe "to take that semen away" or "to drain those cocks".

Also, any word after a period (.) needs to start with a capital letter.

Personally I wouldn't have an exit link to Google but that's just me.

Main page "Cum inside and feel those anus for yourself" should be "Cum inside and feel this anus for yourself"

I would put some text above and below the banners. Get the surfer excited. Tell him what he can get, how much there is to see, how easy it is to join, how it's better than any other anal site, and then tell him what to do. "Click Here For The Free Tour At Supreme Anal!" "Get The Three Day Trial For Only $1.00!" "Join The Anal Girls At Supreme Anal!" "Join Supreme Anal And Start Downloading in Seconds! Click Here Now!"
Something telling him what to do.

Galleries. I wouldn't put a link to gallery 2 on gallery 1. Surfer clicks back to the main page to get the link for gallery 2 he looks at your ads again. Again, more text above and below the banners. Or remove some banners and just use text. Text sells better than banners anyway. I use banners to add color to a page and to act as a divider seperating areas of the page.

Nice start, keep tweaking it! |thumb

|bow| Licker4U:
THANKS !!! you helped me so much!

This Is a new one I made with your suggestions =>Pump_my_ass
Where can i link if its not google? :D

Please Tell me what you think about it :D

Do you think i can pull some clicks from those ads?
Do you think it will be accepted in those LL?

Thanks so much for your support and help!

I've noticed by the 3 or 4 sites you've posted that the layout is somewhat extremely similar. You should try to be creative, change things up a bit, make each site look different and experiment.

I did this for a while until I saw what sites were converting and which ones were not. I took those sites that did and duplicated what converted into new sites.

You'll eventually get a style of your own but one that converts for your traffic

Just buy a domain! :)

STOP BUILDING NEW FREE SITES. It's pointless to continue producing 'new' sites until you have a real host and domain. None of the lists you have recip buttons for are going to accept any of the sites you've built thus far, unless the reviewer is asleep. Hell, they may never even open them up to look at them once they see 'gratishost' in the URL.

I'd love to sit here and pick apart your sites, your horrific use of English and how each site uses the same damn pics, but there is no point critiquing the sites themselves until you own a domain and are using an acceptable paid host.

Every link should be on a page for a reason. What's the reason for having an exit link? If they want to leave your site they can hit the back button or exit the site with that little red "x" in the top right corner |jester|

Text around the banners is getting better but the english grammar is still off. All of the text doesn't have to be linked. Play around with it.

Get a paid host. You can get hosting for $5.00/month at some places. Find a friend and pay them $5.00 to put it on their credit card.

I have a "dumb newbie" question about this: If you download a banner from a sponsor, stick it it on a page, attach a url link to it, how do you control it if opens in a new window?

thanks thanks thanks!
Now i have host!
these are the url of the freesites in their new host:
1) Babes_anal_pleasure
2) Teeny_Love_It_Deeply
3) Pump_my_ass

Please now that i have host can you critique it?
i'm really sorry for my english, is there any way i can check the grammar of the site with some software? or just english clases? :D
About the picks, you think i should change them in each site? or i can make some sites with the same ones? The sponsor i'm working with (spacash) doesn't have much pics to chose, that's why i'm using always the same, but please, what you suggest?

porn Junkie:
thanks for your advice! its really wise, i should be making diferent free sites, i will try to change my style from now on and explore diferent desings as you said.

Thanks you all guys for your support and advice!

would you mind telling me what you think about it? (now that i have a host! :D)

I must admit I deleted a site earlier today that had the "gratishost" in it's url. Never looked at the site itself... I think it was the one his first post.

can i submit them again with this url?
i just fixed the grammar errors i could see.
Edit: in Pump_my_ass that's the better one i think...

Sure. Buy a .com domain and junk that .org. :(

Who is your host? Your nameserver's whois appears to be the same as your domain's.

Learn, then build.

Buy .com domain. I am from Romania and have no problem in having my own several debit cards including epassport. I can pay on internet with them. Also some ll will not accept you with text written on you gallery pics

by now i just can use that .org domain, its pr 4 wich is good, the owner allows me to put some links in the main page so thats a good point too, will my fs be accepted in that .org domain?
it is not a free host...

If the owner isn't you, you're just not getting it.

You must own the domain.
You must have a proper host (that you actually pay for).
You must be in control of all aspects of your business.

i partially own the domain, i own it with my buisness partner.
i pay for the host.
and i'm not in control of all aspect of my buisness because i still didnt make any profit with it, as soon as i have my income, i will for sure buy many domains, one for every niche i want to work for.
Thanks Again for your support, please keep telling me what you think about my freesites, its helping me so much!!
here is a new one i made:
My_ass_hurts
What do you think about it?
thanks again everyone!

Hi, new freesite! just want to know if you think it will be listed...
i worked a lot more in this one, tell me what you think, if you see any mistakes or anything, i would appreciate it so much!

Here it is:
Penetrated_Teeny

Its my host now so that won't be a problem! :D

Hi guti
Firstly even if you own it,you're not going to get very far with a .org URL. Make it a priority to get a .com or at least a .net. Then your Free sites will get seriously looked at by the LL's.

Secondly, you've got some blind links on Penetrated Teeny. For instance on your warning page, above the recips the link doesn't mention the name of the sponsor. The surfer doesn't know where he's going - that's a blind link, and that means refusal at most LL's. Same goes for the bottom link on your main page.

Cheers

i've chosen that .org domain, because its Page Rank 4, and i will upload my fs to that page too, and i will make trades with pages with 100k uniques so i think its better than a unranked .com to start...
THANKS SO MUCH, i learned about blind links, that won't happen again for sure!
check it now, i fixed that, now the text links says cuteteencheaters.com so the visitor knows what is clicking.

===> Penetrated_Teeny<===

thanks again all of you that have helped me so much in my beginning with free sites.

A single question: Can i change the recips of the fs and submit it to other LLs? or i have to make a new fs for every set of LL i submit too?

scuse me for being so noob, some day i hope to help you too!

Honestly, what you think really doesn't matter. Getting listed matters - and you aren't listening to our advice. You insist on using a .org domain and you have yet to verify who your host is, though I mentioned that it appears fishy.

People reviewing your free sites don't care about page rank. Nor do they care that you intend on trading links with 100k sites (even though you have zero traffic).

Good luck to you.

I knew that under that rough exterior was a gentle soul...:D

You've shown more patience than usual. (Hee hee)

guti

Yep, You should take serious note of what's said here. As UW says, getting listed matters.
.org means nothing, you should get .com or .net. or else you won't get known as a serious submitter.
For now, whilst you're starting off, forget Page Rank, forget trades with 100k uniques.
Start making FS on serious domains which you own. You're obviously making an effort here but you should focus it, don't make assumptions about what's needed.

Hi guti, I didn't see that enyone notice little linking mistake on you main pages on the first two sites:
http://analpassion.gratishost.com/Fr...sure/site.html
http://analpassion.gratishost.com/Fr...eply/site.html
Your text links GALLERY1 and GALLERY2 both leading to gallery1, you'll need to correct that!

I saw one more thing on the first site
http://analpassion.gratishost.com/Fr...sure/site.html
You have messed up the pictures, the first pic is from gallery2 and the second is from gallery1
What can I trade with you when you don't have a traffic |crazy|
Domain with PR and without traffic is useless, I saw some porn domains with PR6 with around 10k daily traffic but also I saw worldsex with PR4 and over 1Milon daily traffic, all I say is that PR is not important.
For every job you wanna work you'll need the proper tools. The proper tools in adult biz are your OWN domain .com (the best choice) and your own paid host. If you can not afford that then you must look for some other job, I'm sorry but that's just the way it is!

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Im am totally new. Here is what i did. First i bought a bunch of domains. I signed up with Bangbro partner program. The affiiate program lets you make a free site webdesign. Its easy just click away. I grabbed a bunch of recips to put on the warning pages. I just started submitting to the links today so we will see the results in a month or so. check out the results and tell me what you think.

http://easyxxxseekers.com

http://bestxxxfucksite.com

http://myslutadventure.com

David2222, I don't think those sites will get listed at the link lists you have. Most link lists require 20 images, 10/gallery. You need two galleries. You need an index/warning page which you have, but you've got six outgoing links and most link lists only allow 3/page. After your index/warning page you need a main page, and again, the 3 links to your sponsor. Somewhere on that page, usually at the bottom are two links to your gallery pages. Tha galleries can have 3 sponsor links on each one. Also, make each site different. I'm sure others will have some helpful comments.

guti::
I haven't really looked at your sites.... the grammar is hurting my eyes. I'm sure there are english classes where you live, and getting a better grasp of the english language will help a lot if you want to continue in this biz.
By the way, having a capital letter after "." or "!" is standard in any language, even the European ones.

Second, make sure the whois of the domain you're using tells who the owner of the domain (in other words YOUR name, or the name of your company), not that the owner of the domain hosted with xxx want to be anonymus. That is if you want to be listed...........

.com (even .net) is standard in this biz, if you want to learn, listen to the webmasters that's been here for a while. They won't tell you what you want to hear, they will tell you what you need to hear....
If your sites won't get listed, how is the pagerank going to help you??

So, improve your english, read and remember what people have written in this thread and start over again. Instead of linking one poor site after the other, try to make one real good one and repeat what you learn making that one.
People will correct your grammar, your spelling and other things for you (as they did with your first page) but asking for help with site number two with the same errors will get old pretty fast.....

Good luck.

Why do you have them on different domains, and why do you have those sites on the root of the domains???? Are you planning on buying a new domain for every freesite you make???

And the sites you're linking to are NOT freesites. They look more like galleries with a warningpage, and they will not get listed.
A freesite is warningpage, mainpage, gallery1 and gallery2.
Do a search in this forum, read the tutorials on freesites and start over again.

Thanks SO much guys!! the help was really great! 10x!
Well, the host company of the domain www.mvip2001.org is The Planet, and it's a dedicated server...
And thats no problem, i'm just trying to learn how to make the best freesites in the design point of view, then i buy a new domain.
The pr thing was because i was trying to make a "LL" with my fs, with a partner and with some strong trades(with big traffic) that we could get... but if you say its useless i will think about it, thanks.
About the grammar errors, i just realized about that, and its really impressive, I didn't know how bad my english was until now... maybe I could do it if I concentrate, I'm working 20 hours a day and not really thinking what i'm writing (yes i'm stupid &/or a little stoned xD i will have to correct all those sites, and the further ones)

Btw i just make this new sites, one didn't get listed :(
==>Deep penetrated teens
==>My ass hurts<= This one got lots of traffic (sent me like 150 uniques to the sponsor in 3 days xD), i dont know why... maybe it did get listed in all the LL or something... :P
==>Teeny Love It Deeply<=This one has lots of grammar errors i have to fix :(
==>Penetrated Teeny
==>Pump my ass
==>Teens plays with cock

What do you think about the design? The banners? The spots? The ads?
do you think that they will pull any some clicks from those?

Thanks again