First site please review & let me know if I am on the right track
 

Hi all

Well here is my first site so can I have some feedback please as I don't want to get blacklisted for some thing I may have done wrong.

http://ondemandvids.com/jim-slip-ana...ite-stockings/

Please let me know if I am on the right track?.

Regards

The Stig

The link to Richard is incorrect & opens in a new window (which is not allowed by me & a few others)

hmm
 

looks good, a few problems though.

first off, on your main page you need to have text "Gallery 1" and "Gallery 2"by the thumbs that goto the galleries, you will end up being denied a listing at some places because of this.

second, you have FIVE sponsor links on your main page, maximum is 3!

other then that i cant see anything else, although im sure some other gg&j members will jump in with suggestions.

hmm
 

my bad, i did not notice 2 of the links on your main page goto galleries, since they do no have "gallery 1/2" text in them.

either use the thumbs with text to link to the galleries, or just text, no reason to have it like you do, just makes it hard for the surfers to navigate

Many thanks GG I will chang that right now

Re: hmm
 

Thanks for the comments RE
"second, you have FIVE sponsor links on your main page, maximum is 3!"

Their are ony 3 links to sponcer the ones above & below the banner near the bottom goto the galleries

I have added "Gallery 1" & 2 under the thumbs now & will uplaod again

When I submit it in the comments do I need to not put words like fucking ect & more like "2 gallaries of real UK amateur babes in fishnet stockings "??????

hmm
 

for a description you can use "fucking" i do believe. there is no need to use "2 galleries of" though

Re: hmm
 

Tks mate

well I have my tin hat on so I had best submit it then