Please review my Free Site ...
 

hi this is my free site and already listed in some LLs. What do u think? Can u see any wrong points ?
http://www.dailyfreeporn.net/free/hot-cartoon-actions/
Thanks...

Hi OKN,

The one thing that sticks out at me is the text. e.g. "We guarantee." "Choose Your Way To the Best Porn.", "See Pictures ," (space between s and ,), "Are You Still Waiting . " (no question mark, doesn't say what you're waiting FOR), "What are you looking for."(missing ?). "Watch Hentai girls screaming" "ARE LOOKiNG FOR FRESH HENTAi PORN. " (unusal capitalization plus no question mark).

Other minor points:

You don't have any meta keyword/descriptions on your index.html.

Your sponsor links might look less confusing with a mouseover.

The logo graphix is a little hard to read.

The exit/enter links are too close together imo.

The warning text table could use padding.

You might to better with keyword-rich htmls, instead of gallery1.html, main.html.

Nice looking site though, just need a few minor tweaks.

EDIT: Your exit link goes to google.com.

Thanks For your Reply . My English is really bad.So it s really diffucult to write texts for sponsor link. i make mistakes everytime. i ll always use meta tags on my pages.Thanks
Please post about my free site...

Hi O-K-N,

You might want to format your links a little better too

Are you interested in Cartoon Animations? CLICK HERE AND
GET INSTANT ACCESS

Might want to change it to:

Are you interested in Cartoon Animations?
CLICK HERE AND GET INSTANT ACCESS

and...

Choose Your Way To the Best Porn.CLICK HERE AND GET INSTANT
ACCESS

to:

Choose Your Way To the Best Porn!
CLICK HERE AND GET INSTANT ACCESS

Just minor things, but it looks a little better. Since people are surfing on so many different resolutions it's better that you format the links for a table that fits within 800 res, that way you know that everybody will see them the way you want it to :)

The Gallery 1/2 link graphic is also screwed in FireFox. There's an empty space between Gallery 1 and Gallery 2.
Other than that it looks good :)

Take a peek at gallery two you have a few censored images that can and will cause you not to get listed in some places

your site is nice but it needs some editing especially the text as suggested by Halfdeck too.

Thanks For your replys