Newbie needs review
 

Can someone review this for me before I submit it.

www.4hotxxx.com/sexy-young-lesbians

Thanks Briskit |waves|

You use lots of text which is a very good thing.

Your pics are over compressed and will hurt you in getting listed.

Some of your links are a bit blind.
Like this one
"Cum watch sexy young lesbians have a strap on party
And a pussy licking contest!"

Add in the sponsor's name so that it isn't blind.
Like this
Cum watch sexy young lesbians have a strap on party at LesboErotica
And a pussy licking contest!
Click Here for LesboErotica

I don't care for the red text on a green background. You may want to take a look at the colors use don the sponsor's site for ideas on what colors to use.

Thanks for the suggestions Cleo! Anyone else have anything to add!

Thanks Briskit

What Cleo said,
but I think your 'Watch these pussy licking nymphos' link on index page is even more blind,
+ you may have troubles with getting listed at few LL becouse lack of nudity in gallery1 (ie. Greenguy's link-o-rama),
+ you are using old Outlaws Porn recip

Basically what Cleo and Mateusz said, especially the image quality and blind links. I would also take some of the exclamation marks out, you don't need one at the end of every sentence.

I was going to say about the image quality, Cleo Already got that.. duh..:)

Full size pics are on the small side also, might get you rejected.

ronnie

newbie keephonest here!
 

hello everybody!
i'm new to this board and hope learning more at here...
keephonest

welcome and Briskit and keephonest!:)

what Cleo said is right..the quality of the images are not very good.

Briskit, good job. Briskit is a personal friend of mine, and I assure you he is honest. :)