Here's another one to review
 

I tried using everybodys advice on this one.

www.4hotxxx.com/sweet-shaved-lesbians

Thx Briskit

Overall I'd say it's pretty good. I'd list it, although lesbian is a pretty saturated niche at the moment. I'm getting twice as many lesbian submits as any other cat.

Hi Briskit,

http://www.4hotxxx.com/sweet-shaved-lesbians

Your 2257 should be linked to a separate 2257 page.

Gain full & unlimited access to these
and tons of other freebies!!! -- imo that's a blind link. Squeeze a sponsor name in there.

Also it says "freebies" but I don't really see anything free about that paysite, so some reviews can see it as misleading text.

Your exit link should go to a non-adult sponsor, not google.

You repeat "unlimited access" 3 times on the page, which SE might like but from surfers pov, I associate unlimited access for e.g. dvd download sites that lets you download whatever without DRM protection, instead of like AEBN VOD where you pay per movie or some other sites where the movies die once you cancel.

http://www.4hotxxx.com/sweet-shaved-lesbians/main.html

"Click here for more hot fucking lesbian love!" might be a *little* blind.

The site is too bright for my eyes and could be spiced up a bit visually, but overall I don't see huge problems with the site :)

Ok thanks for the input. If anybody else has anything else to say please fill free to tell me.

Thx Briskit

I'd put a banner/image on the main page, as right now there's nothing really "eye catching" on there & adding it might attract the surfer's attention.

That is kind of a grey area, I never link my 2257 statement to a seperate page, and don't seem to have many problems getting listed because of it.

That being said, if your sponsor content provider has a 2257 page for their content, I don't think it would hurt to link to it. :)

I'm not a lawyer but I do know that having this on your page does not cover you:

You have to have the address where the documents are online someplace - it doesn't have to be linked, you can just have the unlinked URL on there - but the address is required none-the-less.

What about having a statement under it saying something like, content provided by 'paysite name'? Do you need an actual physcial address location?

Technically, you are supposed to provide the URL to the location of their info.

Ok thanks,

my future templates will include a link to the 2257. :)

I would change the bg color or the text color. i think white / orange isn´t the best choice. And text is arial and times new roman. i wouldn´t use times on a website. Arial or verdana are a better choice.

I don't need spiders reading my 2257 pages, so I just put the full URL in text without a link...hasn't hurt me at all getting sites listed. |pimpin

In fact, I think someone here at the board first suggested that to me.