Need Review
 

|waves| Can someone review this site

www.4hotxxx.com/hot-blonde-in-lingerie

Thx Briskit

Don't see anything there that will keep you from getting listed. If I were you I'd add a few graphic ads to your text links on the gallery pages. A banner with text right above or below is considered to be one link by just about everyone, and the text links don't really jump off the page like they could. As an option you could also change your link color to make it stand out a bit more. That said, I'd list it :)

your site looks really plain.

what Madmax had suggested would improve your site and might have a chance of getting listed.

I agree, a little on the blah side. And the ads dont really stand out.

ronnie

Those colors aren't overly enticing. Rather drab, don't you think? I'd make the thumbs a bit bigger and clearer. The one I downloaded was only 2.5kb, so you have room to play. Your target should be 5-7kb each depending on the initial pic quality. Also, in your text links, don't lowercase the paysite domain. Uppercase the first letter of each word so they are distinct, like LingerieSins.com. Otherwise is looks like one long indecipherable nonsensical word. There are a couple of minor spelling errors you could fix as well.

It's listable in its present form, but it could be much better with just a little tweaking.

Your site doesn't break any major rules which makes it listable. However, you use the word "blonde" 10 times and the word "watch" 7 times. You might wanna spice up the text a little and try not to repeat the same word too many times. Try using other words that are synonymous. An online thesaurus could assist in helping you to improve your text..:)