I need criticism :)
 

Hi, Im looking for some comments on a freesite that I am working on and would like any ideas / suggestions that may help me improve the site and get listed at as many places as possible. Dont hold back.. if you think something sucks then please let me know... I want raw, insightful comments.

http://www.hardcoreamateurpictures.com/group_sex/ll/

Re: I need criticism :)
 

Looks ok but not sure this will fly in some places Valid CC, debit card or checking account required for AGE VERIFICATION ONLY!

The links to the galleries could be a bit bigger. Are those sponsor hosted galleries, they don't match the first two pages.

Other than that it looks good.

MrMaryLou, Hmm... yeah I wasnt sure on that one but I wanted to give it a shot.. Since Im promoting a free trial I was trying to think of a way to let them know that they needed a valid CC etc. to activate the membership but that it would not be billed for the trial period. Any ideas on how I could convey this message and stay within the rules / guidlines on this. Or do you just think I should remove any mention of age verification / proof of age ?

Surfn, no those are my own.. I wanted to make the galleries to match the promo material and the tours as best I could but I couldnt come up with a way to do that and have the galleries really match the rest of the site so thats what I ended up with.. do you think that will hurt the acceptance / performance of the site ?

It really depends on the reviewer, most like continuity.

I would put a little space between the enter link and the bottom of the page.

Other then that it looked ok. :)

:) Thanks for the comments guys.. I am going to try tweaking things a bit and give it a go. I have one final question tho and this is one thing that has always been confusing for me.. when I add my recips in what is the proper procedure. I know everyone wants to be on the index page but obviously if you are submitting to 100+ linklists thats just not possible, my solution last time was to put the largest ll's on the main index and instead of making mirror pages to simply create new directorys and put an index .html in each with different recip links. i.e. /index.html, /1/index.html, etc.. This seemed to work well but I would like some confirmation on this if possible.

IMO the insane orgy link on the index is blind, and the enter link is the smallest text on the page. They would get you declined with me..:(

DD

DangerDave, thanks for chiming in on this.. the enter link is easy enough to fix. What would make the Insane Orgy link not blind for you ?

"Valid CC, debit card or checking account required for AGE VERIFICATION ONLY!"

This will more than likely get you thrown out of any free tiral program - I'd remove it ASAP

Something like

INSTANT ACCESS TO INSANE ORGY FOR
EXTREME GROUP SEX VIDEOS HERE !


I like to see something that identifies it as an off site link..

DD

Greenguy, thanks for the input, yeah I was planning on taking that off after MrMaryLou said something I just havent started making the final revisions yet.. I think it's a pity you cant say that tho :( Any ideas on something that would convey the same message and still be within the guidlines ?

DangerDave, thanks for getting back to me on that.. I will fix that before I start submitting. I have a list of revisions now, but it looks as if I may have to wait till tommorow to finalize the site and start actually submitting it. Thats cool tho, because I gained a bit of insight and I think it will be a better site once I have implemented all the suggestions.

A big thanks to everyone that has responded and helped me out here, I really appreciate it.

WarChylde try free trial :) Be honest with the surfer lying to get them to click isnt gonna make a sale :)

MrMaryLou, I am trying to be honest with them.. I want them to know they need a valid credit card / debit card to qualify for the free trial... Hee hee.. of course while it is for age verification I really just want to make sure that they are able to be billed when/if they convert to a full member :) Anyways yeah.. maybe simple is better, thats what I ended up going with.