please review my site
 

hi everyone.
i need your opinions about my free site.
My English is not enough.So i make a alot of mistakes.help me on this way.

And i put a gif on index to promote sponsor.Can i use anything like that? What do u think?

http://www.dailyfreeporn.net/free/bigtitsfucked/

Looks okay for the most part....On your gallery pages, you have too many links in your text. You linked each line of text separately, so "Click here for the tour" is actually 3 links, instead of only one. Same thing with the text at the top. I don't know if you'd get rejected for that or not, since it is still one ad.

You might want to work on the title....It sounds like a boobs site, but it's hardcore....Don't know if it would make a difference or not though. I'm sure some of the more knowledgable folks here can tell you. :) Good luck with your sites!

thanks for your reply any idea?

i think your title doesn't correspond on the content of your site.

You might get a few more helpful answers if you post it in the link list section of the board.

I think its ok...and as madleinx said about the links "On your gallery pages, you have too many links in your text. You linked each line of text separately...." Just making it one link would work best.

The only thing I would say is that I would probably still approve the site if it was submitted to my link directory, but would give a few design pointers on your layout and colour coordination. You might want to try to keep your thumbs all the same such as all verticle or all horizontal...not a major issue, but some LL's and directories might say something.

Keep at it though....every gallery site you create will only get better with each one :)

Hey OKN,

One minor thing I noticed in your source is you have no keyword/description metas. Also, on your index.html and gallery pages, the and are missing. You also may want to use an ICRA tag, and add ALTs to your images.

P.S. Using "gallery 1: Hardcore blonde fucking" and/or adding a TITLE="Blonde fucked from behind" (for example) may get better SE hits later on than just "Gallery 1".

The gif on the index page was too small on my monitor to read, and wasn't flashy enough to grab my attention. But I'm pretty sure it's not breaking any LL rules.

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