Built and designed a TGP filled it, but is it ok?
 

Hi forum, I am a noob to this forum and a noob to the adult scene. I have some coding/designs abilities though.

http://www.girlincontrol.com

I was just wondering if my tgp look ok and if anybody in the same nitch wants to trade. I want to keep my tgp clean but do not know if it is possible to make $$/traffic like that. Also who would trade with me since most tgp's i have seen are full of redirects and pop ups and I dont really want em.

I am building a few others and just wondering if i could get some critisizm now from the pros so I dont make the same mistakes.


Thanks, and looking forward to working with you guys in the future.

Andrey

It's a nice concept and layout. I like the name as compared to the niche a lot. IMO you should change the font to Verdana and lighten it up. Not white font, maybe burnt yellow or light brown or tan.

IMO.

Nice work, sexi site. :)
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I think your site has potential.

I would change however the colours, very hard to read which is something you definately dont want

I agree with BOTH points - specially the grey text on the right (your sponsor links?) - almost impossible to read.

You guys are right..i looked at my site on other monitors and it was difficult to read...just mine is set on ultra light (lcd) thats why it looked ok. I will play with the design a bit to make it more accessible.

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