Critique my freesite please
 

Can anyone spare a minute or 2 to crititque my freesite?

http://www.xxxchicks.org/wild-drunke.../drunk-girls-/


Would you list it? Is it any good? What changes would you make and amny other comments.

Cheers! |pimpin

someone could have a problem with "agresive" banner on your frontpage.. I"d list it because of very nice content ;)

I'd list it :)

It's better than most, but could use some fixing, like adding cell space on your tables so the text is not right against other elements. Also, on the main page, the linked text by the larger banner is all out of wack. First line right after the graphic is one word, then the rest does down centered oddly.

Only other drawback is that content is really getting used alot. Might not get listed many places because it might be over used. And of course some places dont list sponsor content in the first place.

ronnie

Other than the widely used sponsor content, you may also run into listing problems with those blind links.

"Click Here for Pretty Girls with Wet Pussies"
"Click Here for Full Length Movies"
"Click Here to See the Movies of this Totally Wild Fuckfest"
"Want to See More Group Fucking and Mad Parties? Then Click Here"

Those all look pretty blind to me :(

Cheers guys!

Whats wrong with the banner? Is it because the animation is very flashy, would something a little more subdued be better?

Exactly... But it is up to rewiewers how big problem is it.. I"d list it despite of that

That'll teach me for now previewing in IE... |banghead|

Pretty dumb really but in my defence it was 4am... the time of day when all my major screwups take place.

Didn't realised I had used the words "click here" so many times!

What do you suggest instead of the links you say are blind? I always thought blind links were when you had a thumb or something that linked to a sponsor.

I guess if I changed the words "click here" to "join" they would no longer be blind?

Like "join now for full length movies"?

I never use banners with a "strobe" effect - they probably piss off surfers more than anything else and looking at them gives me a headache |shocking|

Also, because the banners don't say "hardcorepartying.com", it's unclear whether "hardcore partying" is a sales pitch or a site name, so the banner is blind, making any text links around it blind also unless you mention the site by name.

There's a thread here regarding blind links by MadMax http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441

Simple solution would be mentioning the site name in your text/links in a way that makes it clear "Partying Hardcore" is a paysite.

Thanks for the link. I never realised people saw some of those things as blind links, Maybe that's why some of the big sites reject my galleries. I'm still a relative newbie, about 5 months in, but I'm still learning things everyday. In this case something that i should have learnt much earlier.

OK I've tweaked it. Anyone fancy a follow up look to see how it's looking now. I changed the links, hopefully they are all ok now, and I changed that strobe banner for one a little less intense.


http://www.xxxchicks.org/wild-drunke.../drunk-girls-/

Links look mucho better...well done Dave |thumb

One tiny detail...your exit link leads to a doa site. Not a big deal, probably not many would decline you for it. But, if you're gonna have a link there...it should probably work :D

Nice improvements Dave |thumb

One thing I noticed this time around is the blind link to AR Pass. I know D Partying is part of the AR network but for surfers who don't know, it's confusing.

Cheers again guys!

Are there any good lists of places to submit to knocking about or do I just trawl peoples sigs on this board?

Looking forward to my first proper submission now. :)

The Link List forum on this board is a good place to look.

I'd start my submission with the lists owned by people who posted here though :)

There's also a good (partial) list of sites you can submit to here: http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=25191

Here's a little treasure of a page for submitters - or at least I think it is!
http://www.tons-porn.com/adult_webmaster/
:)

Thanks guys, thats more than enough sites to be going on with :)

Give em hell Dave...looks like you're getting off on the right foot |thumb