Revieuw My Freesite Please
 

Could you give me some advice how i could improve this freesite?

http://www.pinkdildopleasure.com/fre...lit/index.html

kind regards,

Tom van der Weele

Looks good to me the way it is. I wouldn't make any changes at all.

I would list it just as it is.

I would list it if it had my recip :)

Nicely done...yup, I'd list it |thumb

may i suggest that you should use less tables at least on index page (or put title above the table)
But It doesnt do any good with acceptance :)
I mean You will get accepted with the way it is now.. but for SERPS (I think) it will be better.
and you may try diff color scheme.. The one you have looks dramatic :)
AND again my advices should only help you to get more sales from this site AFTER you will be accepted :) Nice site, btw :)

mm, the 2257 link is missing.
Beside that, its pretty good, keep it up
:)

It looks very good. You can submit it here and I will add it right away.

http://www.jansweb.com/cgi-bin/links/add.cgi

all thanks for ya help :)

i will try to change the colours more like the sponser sites their colours,
im pretty bad with colours.. only colours i can fit together are the colours of my clothes :)

if anybody got more tips and advice for me, i would really appreciate it!

kind regards,

Tom van der Weele