Another day - another try
 

Based on your tips I´ve made another free site. Note, the linklist links on the index page are only for demonstration. Is this site now okay?
Thanks for your advice, woman

Some of your full size pics are still on the large size but you're getting closer :)

Your FS shows promise, but there are some issues that will prevent you from getting listed many places.

- Your 2257 link opens in a new window + it has links to sponsor sites.
- Beyond index you have 4-5 links/page, they all open in new windows and some might be considered blind.
- Most of your pics are too big, +100k.

I know you say your recip table is for demonstration only, but make sure you get rid of that sponsor link in there before you go live.

Also, why no ads on index? It's your first and best chance of selling the sponsor.

Site title way too long - 3 to 4 words (not the title tag - the one ON THE PAGE AT THE TOP)

Thumbs on gal 3 grossly too large - 25kb gimme a break! <10kb

Full size images - resize em to 800px on the long side and they'll fall under 100kb

ICRA link opens in a new window

Thank you all. I´ve made all changes but I´ve still questions:

2257 statement cancelled - I am from Austria I don´t need this - right?
Why must the links open in the same window? Never read this rule on submit sites.

You say, on index.html only links to other link resourses, right? But on your website in the Asian category your first link (Cute Asian Teen) has a banner to a sponsor site. Why?

1. No you don't really need it, but I'd put it on there anyway.
2. Lots of linklists have this rule so just let them open all in the same window.
3. I was in Austria 2 weeks ago, they've got some nice snow in Zell Am See and Kaprun :D

Name dropper :D

No, you can (and should) have 3 sponsor links on every page, but earlier today I could have sworn you had a sponsor link among your recips which would make it deceptive. Maybe I was wrong (or you changed it).

It's the crack! :D

Not to be picky as it wouldn't keep you from getting listed on my site but there's some weird verbage like: "but see yourself and enter now the gallery!" instead how about, 'but see for yourself and enter the gallery now!'

And you spelled convince 'convience' on two seperate pages.

I changed it and I understand now: no mix between sponsor links and recips.

Fonz, you are joking! "Nice snow" Very, very much nice snow and it was damned cold the last days.

Preacher - my english is very bad, forgive me.

Thank you all for your great help, woman

I think the design looks pretty good..:)

ronnie

I think that looks very nice and everyone else has covered the things that need fixing. I hope you stick at it, I would love to see some fresh designs!
The english issue can be difficult but as long as you are prepared for criticism and willing to learn you should be ok. Oh and do not use babelfish lol.

If English is an issue - don't use much of it

Click Here To Join [insert paysite name here]
Click Here To Take The [insert paysite name here] Free Tour
[insert paysite name here] Is Great! Click Here To Check It Out Now

It's when ESL people attempt to write big paragraphs that things start making little or no sense...

Thats really good advice Wazza. And I might add there are occasionally sponsors who provide text ads too.
Also, Woman if you have a friend who speaks English well just see if they can look over the text for you to check it makes sense.

That's worth repeating again!

Especially given the recent influx of Roman Maroni submissions, if you keep it short and sweet as Wazza describes...you'll have a much better chance of getting listed. Also, 'usually' you can harvest bits of text from the sponsor tour. I say usually because I've seen some pretty poorly worded sponsor tours too |confused|

Thanks everyone for the great convenience.

I started last July with writing in english and my schooltime is a long time ago. I use usually this site for my translations and of course all promotions texts, that I can find.
But it´s very hard and time consuming, especially at my blog, which is written in german and english. Prior to this I tried to work with german sites only, but I can´t earn money with them. The english market is much better.

So please don´t hestiate and correct me if I am wrong!

Besides what other said, I belive nowdays its required everywhere to use series pics only - you may wish to switch pics on gallery2 or just remove it - remaining two will do.
And as Lemmy said you definately should add some ads on the index page - thats the place where most sales come from.
Also try to mix your ads with the pics (adding thumblike banners its not a best idea if you wanna get listed but what I mean is ie. 1 row of pics, horizontal banner+text, 2nd row of pics) or at least put them on top fo the page - otherwise there is chance some of the surfers will not even notice them

Why this?

Im wondering the same thing... just as an observer.

Actually I checked and can't find anything about series pics but I could have sworn I'd seen it. Sorry, my bad.
Anyway, when you choose pics keep in mind that you will have to create some decent descriptions for your content and it may be a bit hard when you mix softcore with hardcore.

Hmm I thought the same, although I don't have it as a written rule I certainly do prefer it.

Maybe it´s something new but I think it's worth trying. The paysite features beautiful asian ladies, softcore and hardcore - just what my freesite shows. Are LL owners not sensible to new ideas? Only stringent regulations and no place for creativity?

There were many of those who tried to enforce new/ change current rules and trust me.. it didn't bring any good.
This problem would be gone if you used bought content - sets are allways series pics. And I strongly recomend to use it because there are LL that dont accept free content at all, and with those who accept I guess your chances would be doubled with own content.
You will find quality sets for as low as $5, sometimes even $2 - the cheappest sets may be a bit overused but IMO its better than sponsors content anyway. I'm pretty sure you will find some content providers in board resources but feel free to send me private message if you would like some more info.

I did it on purpose, the sponsor has enough other series.

But I have a problem with bought content. Because when I would go from a free site to the promoted paysite I would expect to see the same scene (or especially this hot lady) on the paysite too. If not, I would leave or cancel. Maybe there is a difference between my tenor - I hate fakes and suchlikes - and the tenor of the surfer.
In my opinion paid content is good for member zones or big portal sites, not for direct promotion.
(Hope, you can understand my bad endlish).