The Official Virgohippy's First Freesite Critique
 

My first freesite: |waves|

http://www.pantie-fetish.com/fs06/evening-panty-tease/

Comments/Critique's are much appreciated. |thumb

And no worries about giving it to me hard. Virgohippy's may cry easily but we like knowing how to better satisfy.

Well hell, I was hoping to make a hippy cry...but don't look like that's gonna happen unless you're REALLY sensitive :D

Very nice site |thumb

About the only comments I could come up with would be that you may be offering too many options. Although, I can see the reasons why you're offering what you are...so that's not really a critique.

And I think a few lists may have banned use the word 'young' entirely. Myself, I'm very conscious of how it's used...meaning not at all on teen sites...but do allow the word in the context you're using it.

Sorry to disappoint...but what can I say...it's a good site :)

Awesome! |bananna|

I suppose all that lurking, and looking over peoples' shoulders turned out well.

Thanks for the feedback MrYum. Much appreciated. And no worries about missing your chance to make a hippy cry... maybe next time. ;)

I agree, looks like a good site, well done, nice layout. Refreshing to see some effort put into a free site for a change. One thing you might have a problem, a couple of your pictures look to be on the small side, I did'nt check the size.

ronnie

Very nice job |thumb

You should email me for a PA :D

looks good and I'd list it....see my sig

Thanks for the feedback ya'll. :D

Ronnie: pics are 536px on the long side. I figured between 525-550 is a good size. I haven't read on any rules where people asked for a minimum larger than 500px... not yet anway. What would you suggest?

Surfn: I'll definitely email you for a PA. Once I build a couple more you'll be getting an email from me. |thumb

Plateman: you're on my list for next time. ;)

I would definitely list that site in my panties category. Well done. |thumb

Yup, I'm gonna join the "nice site"-saying people :)
I have to agree with MrYum, be careful using the word "young" when promoting a teen site.

If you need more places to submit your site to... :)

I'd like that one to list :)

Thanks again for all the feedback ya'll. GG&J: you're brilliant to have built and managed this forum so well.

If ya'll got the time/patience, I built, and submitted, another site. Feel free to comment:

http://www.pantie-fetish.com/fs06/feather-whip-panties/

To all those who've said they'd list my site(s) - that I haven't submitted to yet - I'll add you to my list. I'm hesitant to create mirrors, but when I get more LL's to submit to I'll make some mods to "Evening Panty Tease" and get that one out to you, no problem! |thumb

Next step: build one more (good) freesite, then it's partner accounts requests, and all your porn are belong to me!!! |bananna|

Once again, nicely done Virgo |thumb

The only thing I see that may give you problems is the banner on the galleries. Some reviewers may think it looks too 'thumblike'. Given that the sponsor url is on there and the banner images are so much smaller than your thumbs, it looks fine to me though.

Oh...and the last line of your post...|haha

I'll pay closer attention next time. You've been quite helpful. Thanks.

I hoped someone would catch that one. ;)

Your sites seems very nice to me - they have original layout and that I always appreciate