New gallery for your review
 

Hello all,

I'm at it again. Please let me know what you think.

Mariah & Lexi Gallery

Thanks

Grinch

Hey Grinch,

I took a quick peek at your gallery and thought it looked pretty good. I do think your ad text could pop a bit more though and I'm not sure about the big block of text in the middle...might need a little space to breathe...you know, make it a bit easier for the surfer to catch as they glance over the thumbs...:)

Keep at it and good luck.

Regards,
SF

Thanks SF. I debated about the text. The vid that goes with it is really hott, so I wanted to allude to it. Guess I went overboard lol

Hey Grinch,

Descriptive and alluring text can bring the surfer in and get them excited and that's a VERY good thing but it needs to be presented in a way that will attract the surfer's attention.

The surfers that show up at your gallery are there to see the free pics/vids and most of them have their uni-vision enabled :). If you want them to even see your sales pitch you need to grab their attention and then QUICKLY sell them on your sponsor.

I hope that makes sense...:)

Regards,
SF