Need HFS feedback before we move foward
 

I have been reading all the post about HFS and Rhinopays is finally ready to add this usefull tool to our program. I sent over all important info to my designer and he has come up with this
http://roperookie.com/free/index.html

I would appreciate any feeback before we decide to pull the trigger on this

thanks in advance!

Valiant effort.. but...

It is too "graphical"
Header is to big - (it's just uneccessary)
Is the free site name/title - "Bondage Queen"? - If so,... that's good...
Index page warning is a little dominant - ?needs to be smaller
Banners need a bit more "sell" text..

and then every other site needs to be vastly different to this one..

As said it's not a bad effort, and some would say it is usable now.... IMO a few tweaks would make if 'GOOD' :)

DD

Personally I'd love to see some more sell text.
Lose the gigantic logo(top) wasting 300 pixels.

I'd suggest to order from a skilled freesite builder that know what the heck they are doing. Plenty of people around here that do. =)

My main critique is the B&W photography, maybe my surfers are less subtle and artistic minded than some others, but I'm sure they are looking for porn, and that site doesn't promise porn. Subtlety misses the point more often than not.
Less art, more smut (in a teasing sort of way) would be my suggestion. Let 'em know it's not an art gallery, but something they can whack off too.

Some may disagree.. but you want to close off your 'traffic leaks" so i'd lose the exit link.. like google needs more clicks.. if your surfers don't like it.. and you have NO traps set.. i'm sure they'd be able to just back out..

and what all those above said.

I see where you are going with this free site, using the excessively clean and minimalistic aesthetic as the paysite's tour. However, if there is one thing I'd change, it would be the increase in the amount of sales text.

Thanks guys, for all the great feedback, we are going to go back to the drawing board and make the tweaks and definitely Increase the sales text,

Please keep the suggestion coming!


Regards