Critique Our HFS please
 

Heya :)

Got the HTML template from our designer the other day, and I've been working on adding in the text and content to for our hosted free sites. Before I get any additional templates or do up some more sales text, I wanted to ask for critiques and criticism for what we've done so far.

A few things that I was thinking might be an issue is my overly verbose self that can't stop rambling (not sure if there's too much text there), and bolding the text. I haven't seen it done on many freesites, but I use that a lot on my blogs - is it too aggressive?

Of course, tips and tweaks for everything else are much appreciated as well! tweak. After all, you're the ones that are going to (hopefully!) be using them. :)

The only things that I don't quite have in yet are alt and title tags for images and links (will be adding those in for the finalized freesites). Anyway, here's the link to the freesite, have at me, and thank you in advance for any advice!

http://vintageporncafe.com/freesite-sample/

I didn't see anything that would keep me from listing it - nice work |thumb

Cool. :) Once I get the rest of the templates sent over to me, I should have them up in our ad tools in 2 weeks or so. Would be sooner but working on a bunch of other stuff too hehe. :)

Looks fine to me as well. :)

If i was going to get anal about it, I would line up the text and links better instead of having a link that uses 2 lines, but only has 3 words on 2nd line.
for example:

Get Instant Access to More Hairy Pussy at
Good Old XXX!

Which may loook a tad better like:

Get Instant Access to More
Hairy Pussy at Good Old XXX!

Just throws it off alittle and I'm just being picky since you asked for tips and tweaks, site is fine overall by me. :)

Just my 2 cents.

Thanks, adjusted. :)