Please review my first FreeSite and...
 

Hi Folks,

i'm back |waves| and i build my first FreeSite, so please review it and give me your Feedback. It's a long time ago, to build this Sites, this Feedback is very important for me!

A Big Thank You! |bow|

First off, it's pretty nice looking |thumb

A couple things though. First, you want to make sure to fix the spelling and grammar errors like "A blondes getting their asses fucked hard by huge dicks" should be a blondes getting her ass fucked by a hard huge dick. I think its just one guy and one girl in both galleries.

Second, the girl is a brunette and it says blonde everywhere, so you should say brunette. You also should change the title and keywords on each page instead of the same one throughout. Get you a lil se some some.

The site looks really good though, i like the design, just need a few tweaks.

Grammar. Different title/header. Change blondes to brunettes. If you want you could ad a mouseover to the ads to show the site url only, but whatever you want with that.

I'd list it at Foxys with those couple tweaks :)

Brad

Tanks for your fast an helpful answer.

:D yes the Title & Description ist wrong, i use a test-picture-set for this FreeSite and this Description is from a listing FreeSites on Penisbot. :)

My next Step is optimizing for SearchEngines: alt, title text's and metatags.

And than, i build a Design for every day in the Week.
7 different FreeSites Design's and than i submit only the same Design 4 in the month, but the Sites have different Content.

Yes, English is not my first Language, sorry for that. |bow|

No prob, it looked good and except for a couple things was fine. I can't do css yet, so ya got me beat. You can go wider in the future if you want as well, 750 width will be good for even 800/600 and may give you more room for ads and whatnot.

You had 2 sponsors per page which is good, i noticed the link at the bottom to your homepage so it would count as the 3rd link usually. If you wanted to get traffic to it, you could make it a little more prominant being that it counts as one of your outlinks anyway.

Good luck :)

Brad

The first thing I do when I review a site from an unknown submitter is check the whois info. Yours leaves something to be desired. You need to fix that before becoming a "trusted submitter".

What?
What's wrong with the whois info? |confused|

|confused| ... no more feedback? |cry|

i refresh my site with the new input, so please review again and give me a little help, please. |bow|

Here


Thanks!!

Your domain is registered to a company in the US, but hosted in Austria where I assume you are located (if you are the tech contact listed). I find that to be so unusual I'd like some clarification.

Yes, but i live in the fucking anti-adult-land germany. it's the only way for good hosting.

@FreeSite Reviewer / LL Owner
Is the Whois with the same company and hosting, the important thing for a Signup on a Partner Account or a submit on LinkList's?

The reason I, and many others, look closely at the whois of a submitter's domain is that fake whois info is a know cheater tactic. I'm not accusing you of being a cheater, but I do like to know who I'm doing business with.

Given a reasonable explanation I might be able to look past a muddy whois. Do you own the company the domain is registered to in the US? Did you just make it up? Are you the actual owner of the domain? Maybe not relevant, but do you risk trouble with the law by owning an adult website in Germany?

Unanswered these are questions that would lead me to decline your submission at my LLs.

BigRob - may I ask, how many paysites do you own? You seem to have quite the collection under various sponsors.

@Lemmy
In the next Time i switch with Domain & Hosting to godaddy. |bananna|

@Useless Warrior
Free Sites is new for me so i will testing python and leadingedgecash.

Bad idea. GoDaddy isn't very adult friendly.
That doesn't really answer my question, Rob. I'm just wondering if you do, in fact, own a bunch of paysites.

Many AdultWebmaster in Germany use Godaddy für Hosting, Domain with Whois-Protect and she have no bad problems with it.

No, i don't have Paysites.

Search the forum for godaddy problems. There are quite a few and some people won't list you if your hosted with them and as you can see people will check the whois to see.

That really didn't clear up much for me and I'm just as confused.
If I recall correctly GoDaddy specifically prohibits adult content. Using whois protection is a surefire way NOT to get listed.

Well, then Lemmy is right about your WHOIS being questionable.

Your domain's WHOIS:
Domain Name.......... trusted-submitter.com
Creation Date........ 2004-11-21
Registration Date.... 2005-10-27
Expiry Date.......... 2007-11-21
Organisation Name.... Ratman Productions, LLC
Organisation Address. 3511 Silverside Road, Suite 105
Organisation Address.
Organisation Address. Wilmington
Organisation Address. 19810
Organisation Address. -
Organisation Address. UNITED STATES

Admin Name........... Ratman Productions LLC Ratman Productions LLC
Admin Address........ 3511 Silverside Road, Suite 105
Admin Address........
Admin Address........ Wilmington
Admin Address........ 19810
Admin Address........ -
Admin Address........ UNITED STATES
Admin Email.......... domains AT flashlabs DOT at


On the same IP, and having the same WHOIS info:
http://www.ratman-productions.com
http://www.mig-studios.com
http://www.xteenclub.com - paysite with a wembaster link to SpaCash.
http://www.germanflashergirls.com - paysite with a wembaster link to Voyeur Dollars.
http://www.nastygermangirls.com - paysite with a wembaster link to Voyeur Dollars.
http://www.nastypregnantgirls.com - paysite with a wembaster link to Perfecto Dollars.

Different IP, same WHOIS:
http://www.girls-who-smoke.com - seems to be listed with Cash-XXX.

So what's up with that? Are you using a friend's domain and hosting?

A Domain with Whois Protection is the only way for a german living webmaster.

And what is a good Hosting & Domain with Whois Protection Company for me? (Paypal compatiple)


So what's up with that? Are you using a friend's domain and hosting?
Yes, it's a Service form a Friend in Austria.

Relax mate, not all LL has problems about whois protection. I submit with whois protected domain, only couple of LL declined me for that.
Nice looking design by the way, If you are honest webmaster-good luck in the game of freesites :)

Thanks, fresh. |headbang|

An the next Day's i have all my different Designs and than i started.