My first free site.Take a look
 

This is my first free site http://www.allpussypictures.com/freesites/fs1/bbw/

Any input or suggestions would be appreciated.
Thanks

With a quick glance, you only have 5 recip links on there (I require 6), a lot of the pics are out of order, some of the pics are not completely uploaded, the table that the thumbs are in is too small which means it's stretching & the text is off center.

ok thanks Greenie,i hope to made a good free site for future

Yep, you need more recips or you'll get rejected at most LL's. You can safely use 15 button recips or even 20 if you make your own text recips. Text recips look better too.
I would suggest using more sales text on every page to feed those SE spiders and to make the pages more interesting. They're a bit empty and bland. But for a first site I think you've done very well. Its excellent. :)

Greenie already pointed out what I was going to suggest. Pics out of order and not enough recips.

One more thing is you might want to make your header stand out a bit more. Add some bigger text or whatever, just make it pop a bit more.

I like the thumbs, bigger and good quality. Nice.

Could just be me, but the line: "Fuck those skinny bitches" hangs my brain up a little with the double meaning...probably a minor thing. I do like the site.

I think you made a great freesite.

Nice site, but I agree with the "more recips" thing. Put more recips on each mirror, and make fewer mirrors, which leads to fewer dupes in the SEs.

Not bad for a first one!

A few things -

1. The thumbs in the galleries are huge, you could make them half the size and they'll still be large enough.

2. The thumbs are also not aligned properly - is that on purpose?

3. You have a lot of text in the text links themselves. I usually do 1-2 lines of unlinked text, then a big in-your-face linked line. I have seen reviewers comment about not linking entire paragraphs, not sure how they would treat your text.

4. On the second gallery, they can easily center the page and jack off to the gallery. They get full view of the whole set, large enough thumbs and no ads to distract them... maybe put some ads in the middle there to prevent that.