How'm I Doin' Part 2: My First Gallery
 

I appreciated the first round so much and since I'm new, thought I'd bug you a bit more. Here is my first gallery (free content from that sponsor). How's it look? Am I on the right track, way off, somewhere in between?

Jesus thanks you: |buddy|

JustAnotherDude

hmm a couple of problems with that one...

Pics open in new windows.. most places dont allow that. :(

Your table/thumbs are too wide... at 1024x768 you gallery scrolls off the side of my monitor..:( that will get rejected to

You gallery lacks SELL! you need more text in there enticing the surfer to BUY...

The linked "I luv Blowjobs" header will get you declined in a few places too


So its a decent start... just needs some tweaking

DD

What DD said.

That's about the size thumbs I use. If it were me I would make 4 rows of 4. 16 pic total. That number and layout will help getting listed as well. ;)

Way too wide :(

All above mentioned. Especially text to try to sell the surfer more. Also, non-series photos do not get accepted a lot out there. Meaning it should be the same girl in all photos if at all possible.

Thanks guys. Not my content, so there's not a whole lot I can do (this is more for practice and just to get some stuff up than a serious draw), but I'll make those improvements.

Alright, changes made. Link is the same. How's it look?

The layout looks fine to me. :)

You need to do better with your sales text. Think of the biggest tease you have ever known, now put your text links in their words. :D

Biggest tease I've ever known? I think she'd object to me mentioning her by name....

OOOOOOOH!

Thanks, but I'm not really interested in meeting her. However, the easiest girl you ever met is another story. lol