this is my first FreeSite... YAY!
 

papaGMP helped me... blame him. |loony|

A Toy For Thena

please provide feeback or this bitch is going up as is.

thank you!

Hmmm... It's a little subtle |jester|
But I like it |thumb

Looks like shit to me - why isn't there some guy ramming his cock in her?

Oh ya, that's right, her boyfriend couldn't get it up.........

I'll let the rest of you tear up Jack's first FS - she's already heard what I had to say. |egg|

thank you sheepguy!
 

|bananna|subtlety is my specialty. |bananna|
|cheerlead|

Damn Nice site
Gallery 1 - the bottom 2 videos are not linked. You also have room for another sponsor link. I think it would go good between the videos, Like you did in gallery 2.
For your first freesite this is very good.

thanks for telling me. i guess i overlooked something. damn. its all good!:D

It's your bosses fault. Kick him in the nads and submit the site. :D

Hiya Jack |waves|

On gallery 2 there's a bit of text you probably want to snip off.
Just losing the word 'you' will fix this:

"In fact, you we'll be posting some awesome hardcore vids of Thena on Real Colorado Girls - real fuckin soon!"

HTH

If I was you I'd put a least a tag on your first page (or all your pages). That text will appear underneath your link when you page gets indexed by th SE's. It's also good for SEO.

Other than that, your first freesite looks like 29.5 times better than my first freesite back in the days :)

I wish my first FS looked that good. Good job! |thumb

Serious.

Nice job GMPcash-jack :)

Looks Great :D
A couple fixes to do and submit away. Look forward to listing it for ya.

I'll list it... |pimpin

Hell, I wish my LAST one looked that good...:D