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Just started a few turnkey sites with group affilaites. What do you think and how can we improve?

www.AsianXXXDelights.com
www.FreshAmateurHotties.com

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The word 'turnkey' scares me. I've never heard of a turnkey paysite turning out very well. Typically, the purchaser gets scammed and finds out that they own/control nothing.

My primary criticisms of those two sites are that both tours look rather anitquated - very 1990s - and there are multiple banners for other sites on them. I suppose, if you aren't running an affiliate program, then those banners aren't a big deal. But if I owned the sites, I'd want the focus to remain on joining my site, not the competition's.

I agree

You would be better to, at least, remove the others sites banners from the welcome page.
Before a visitor is even presented with your offer he gets 5 others sites competing for his attention (and his money).

Also, it may have slip under my radar but I was unable to find any available content in the "free preview" pages. All links seems to be pointing to the ccbill signup page. It may be a good idea to give the prospective customer a little "taste" of the content.

Sorry dude. You've been snookered.

The time to research the business is BEFORE you pay any money.

I hope you can get some of your money back, but chances are the folks who took it are too clever to make that easy.