Blog review
 

Hi I have had this blog for a few months now but it still isnt doing much of anything. This is my very first blog so I know I got to be missing something. www.hotbbwblog.com . Let me know what ya think

Fairly plain looking blog but your main problem is the posts all lead to a sponsor. You need posts that go deeper into the site making the site more than just 1 page. And the pages that do go deeper are bad links, not keyword links.

http://www.hotbbwblog.com/?p=72 for example should be set up to be the keywords of the post. So sienna-milks-a-big-cock so the search engines can pick it up.

That's usually in your Settings>> Permalinks. Change that from default!

The good news is it ranks for a few keyphrases, including #7 for 'bbw blog' on google at the moment. The bad news is you're promoting sites from the SOBV network, who stopped paying webmasters months ago.

@HowlingWulf I made the blog way back when they were actually paying people. I plan on removing those posts tonight.

@Ramster I changed the permalinks like you suggested

Can you guys give me some examples of good blogs so that I will know what I should be shooting for. Yea I know I can just look at some blog directories but I don't know which blogs would be considered good or bad

crickets

Takes a long time to load. There are a few images not appearing, suggesting there is something wrong.

The top post (Pretty BBW sweetie flaunting...)
Couple of spelling mistakes, and repetitive word use. Spelling mistakes can help SE results of course, but not with words like boys/bays.

Are you targeting US or UK visitors?
You're mixing up the terminology, using typically British words like "wanking" with American spelling of "ass".
Using a term like "motorboating" suggests American audience.
Are you targeting both or specifically a US market? If the latter, I think you need to focus on writing specifically for an American audience and do away with British slang terms. You can always add these into tags.

Speaking of which, you have several specific keywords in your text, but then very loosely connected tags. Personally, I'd add a post to categories, then add tags seen within the copy.

@conran
Yea i gotta make some changes. looks like one of my sponsers have gone to hell and some of my ads are running slow because of it. Im in the process of getting all of their posts removed.