My 2 First Freesites, who will list them?
 

Hi, i finish my 2 frists freesites, and need some critics. thnx in advance.

LL owners tell me if you will list my freesites please.

http://www.nastyhotbabes.com/FS/mp-blonde-amateur/

http://www.nastyhotbabes.com/FS/sophie-big-boobs/

Warlock777,
First off the design looks good however their are a few things you should change.

On the warning pages don't use the word "enter" in a sponsor link. Also the thumb on the warning page of the first site should not be linked to the sponsor. These are definately blind links. Another thing, the last thumb on the secong gallery is linked to itself. It should be linked to the associated picture. You also might want to check the compression on your images, they are looking a little over compressed.

The sites overall are pretty good. Fix the above problems and you'll have a good chance at getting listed at most Link Lists.

what MatrixFan said... plus:
- usually at the top of the warning page you should place your freesite title.
- three outgoing links max. (including sponsor, your hub...)
- do NOT use 'ENTER' for advertisement - but besides it - do NOT use CLICK HERE also :) (on warning page)
- my display resolutin is 1280x1024 and your background is too short. try to work with css styles and correct this
- pictures resolution - at least 600px

all other should be fine, just finish this freesite and then post url again

|peace| blind

Your sites are good quality but there are a few nonos for sure.

-As already said, you cannot have ENTER on the warning page anywhere other than to enter into your actual free site. Any other text will do usually.
-You need a site title and it is always good to have the enter into your free site to say Enter "site title" Here

Those are major. Also some of your banners are not linked. You need to be careful with the text used to link to the sponsor on gallery pages as to not create a blind link. The link colors are too close to the background color.

i will make the changes and re post, thnx to all for help me.

I wouldn't allow the exit link.
Exit links should be specifically non-adult.
Yours goes to a hardcore fpa on a url named "google.com"
That would get you banned for me!

Also I would have problems with the continued use of the word "young" especially such non-specific uses as "young bodies".

http://www.nastyhotbabes.com/FS/mp-b.../mainpage.html

I count 4 links on this page - auto decline.

Appears you have been working on this with the suggestions above, so I don't know what it looked like before.