You are a busy, busy man.
Keep in mind, I'm no guru. I don't own any paysites, but I have lots of opinions. (Perhaps too many)
First of all, I like the tour graphics much more on this new tour. It's very clean and the navigation is simple and straight forward. I would add a second tour page to show the surfer a little more variety of the photo shoots with different sexy outfits and stages of undress. There isn't much of a teaser there right now. Also, the sample pics you are using now are grainy. The ones on the old tour are a much higher quality. This is where you really want to show the potential member what they'll be getting. If the pics look crappy on the tour, they'll assume that the member's area is the same.
Your first sample video is 11mb. Too big. (It took a couple of minutes to download on my broadband connection.) Also, you can barely hear her, but your instructions to her are loud and clear. I'd dub in a soundtrack over the original audio. The surfers want to think that she is just naturally sexy and nasty. They don't want to see that she needs to be told how to move. She's a stripper by trade, right? Find some music and let her be herself. I've spent hundreds of dollars during a single weekend falling in lust with strippers. They just naturally know how to lure men in. Throw a couple of drinks down her throat, turn on the music, and let her sell herself the way only she knows how. Zoom in once in a while and move around her. Make the surfer feel that he is in the room scoping her out and that he can touch that super ass of hers. When you keep the camera at one distant point, the space between you and the girl is impersonal and makes it difficult to build a relationship. The surfer has to be sitting there thinking, 'I'd like to come back here, get her naked, and fuck her everyday'. Otherwise, he's going to keep his $19.95.
On the old tour you had a little bio for her. Try and add a text box onto on of the tour pages where she can introduce herself and make the surfer feel at home. Let her tell them how members can chat live with her. You mention the chat, but it's buried down there. I tend to believe it's those personal touches such as chat and 'I take requests' that often seals the deal on single girl sites. Does she have a webcam on during chat, or is just text? Horny dudes love telling a chick to rub her tits or whatever and see her doing it live.
Overall, I think this tour is a great improvement. Keep up the good work. |viking|