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Halfdeck · 2005-02-24, 07:09 PM

Hi OKN,

The one thing that sticks out at me is the text. e.g. "We guarantee." "Choose Your Way To the Best Porn.", "See Pictures ," (space between s and ,), "Are You Still Waiting . " (no question mark, doesn't say what you're waiting FOR), "What are you looking for."(missing ?). "Watch Hentai girls screaming" "ARE LOOKiNG FOR FRESH HENTAi PORN. " (unusal capitalization plus no question mark).

Other minor points:

You don't have any meta keyword/descriptions on your index.html.

Your sponsor links might look less confusing with a mouseover.

The logo graphix is a little hard to read.

The exit/enter links are too close together imo.

The warning text table could use padding.

You might to better with keyword-rich htmls, instead of gallery1.html, main.html.

Nice looking site though, just need a few minor tweaks.

EDIT: Your exit link goes to google.com.

2005-02-24, 07:09 PM	#2
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	Hi OKN, The one thing that sticks out at me is the text. e.g. "We guarantee." "Choose Your Way To the Best Porn.", "See Pictures ," (space between s and ,), "Are You Still Waiting . " (no question mark, doesn't say what you're waiting FOR), "What are you looking for."(missing ?). "Watch Hentai girls screaming" "ARE LOOKiNG FOR FRESH HENTAi PORN. " (unusal capitalization plus no question mark). Other minor points: You don't have any meta keyword/descriptions on your index.html. Your sponsor links might look less confusing with a mouseover. The logo graphix is a little hard to read. The exit/enter links are too close together imo. The warning text table could use padding. You might to better with keyword-rich htmls, instead of gallery1.html, main.html. Nice looking site though, just need a few minor tweaks. EDIT: Your exit link goes to google.com.