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McSpike · 2005-03-04, 07:14 PM

Okay folks, I won't mention whom I got this text from, but I decided for them based on recommendations I read on another board.

The deal was: 149 texts, 120 words each. I wanted them to include exact keyword 4 times in that 120 words text. Each niche had its own keyword and just about every niche in this biz was covered.

This text is meant to be used as search engine food, but because it's very well visible on the site it has to make complete sense.

They promissed it will make sense and even said they can write it in an exciting fashion to get the visitors warmed up. This got me warmed up too. They asked for 40% price increase to make sure the quality to be there. The price was still good so I took it. Cool!

Here's 1 text out of 149 they wrote.
The niche for this one was: Creampies
Exact keyword to be used in the text 4 times exactly was: creampie
Keep in mind that writing text when you are forced to use exact keyword exactly 4 times in only 120 words of text is a bit harder. But they are copywriters, they have the skills, imagination and so on and I paid extra 40%, right? Sure.

Anyway, here's the text:

"Incredibly hot and sexy girls getting their pussy fucked very deep and hard. After a thorough fucking and drilling, these girls received special treats of thick creampie for their ever hungry pussies. Some of the girls featured in this site are shy at first but with the promise of hot and fresh creampie, they heeded. Watch these awesome girls’ tight ass and pretty little pussies get fucked and bathed in creampie. These hung men are really lucky to have these cum-hungry girls at their beck and call. These girls will do anything these hung men wants just to feel their precious fat cocks up their ass and pussies. If you want to see these girls’ asses and pussies eat creampie, then log on and click on the particular links."

They say they check their text for grammar errors twice.

You be the judge.

2005-03-04, 07:14 PM	#2
McSpike I'm going to the backseat of my car with the woman I love, and I won't be back for TEN MINUTES Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 83	Okay folks, I won't mention whom I got this text from, but I decided for them based on recommendations I read on another board. The deal was: 149 texts, 120 words each. I wanted them to include exact keyword 4 times in that 120 words text. Each niche had its own keyword and just about every niche in this biz was covered. This text is meant to be used as search engine food, but because it's very well visible on the site it has to make complete sense. They promissed it will make sense and even said they can write it in an exciting fashion to get the visitors warmed up. This got me warmed up too. They asked for 40% price increase to make sure the quality to be there. The price was still good so I took it. Cool! Here's 1 text out of 149 they wrote. The niche for this one was: Creampies Exact keyword to be used in the text 4 times exactly was: creampie Keep in mind that writing text when you are forced to use exact keyword exactly 4 times in only 120 words of text is a bit harder. But they are copywriters, they have the skills, imagination and so on and I paid extra 40%, right? Sure. Anyway, here's the text: "Incredibly hot and sexy girls getting their pussy fucked very deep and hard. After a thorough fucking and drilling, these girls received special treats of thick creampie for their ever hungry pussies. Some of the girls featured in this site are shy at first but with the promise of hot and fresh creampie, they heeded. Watch these awesome girls’ tight ass and pretty little pussies get fucked and bathed in creampie. These hung men are really lucky to have these cum-hungry girls at their beck and call. These girls will do anything these hung men wants just to feel their precious fat cocks up their ass and pussies. If you want to see these girls’ asses and pussies eat creampie, then log on and click on the particular links." They say they check their text for grammar errors twice. You be the judge.