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Old 2005-03-28, 09:15 AM   #5
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Those colors aren't overly enticing. Rather drab, don't you think? I'd make the thumbs a bit bigger and clearer. The one I downloaded was only 2.5kb, so you have room to play. Your target should be 5-7kb each depending on the initial pic quality. Also, in your text links, don't lowercase the paysite domain. Uppercase the first letter of each word so they are distinct, like LingerieSins.com. Otherwise is looks like one long indecipherable nonsensical word. There are a couple of minor spelling errors you could fix as well.

It's listable in its present form, but it could be much better with just a little tweaking.
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