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Old 2005-03-28, 07:34 PM   #6
Presmar
My wife is not a doobie to be passed around! On our wedding day I promised to bogart her for life!
 
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Your site doesn't break any major rules which makes it listable. However, you use the word "blonde" 10 times and the word "watch" 7 times. You might wanna spice up the text a little and try not to repeat the same word too many times. Try using other words that are synonymous. An online thesaurus could assist in helping you to improve your text..
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