First, a question. Has this gallery design converted for you at other TGP's? The Hun sends a ton of traffic but it is a tough sell. It's best to use proven designs for your submissions.
In my opinion your banners and links don't have enough "pop". The link text is the same color as non-link text. The banner at the top and bottom are the same basic colors as the rest of the page. Nothing is really jumping out at me and saying "click me now!". Some of the right kinds of phrases are there but they're a bit bland. I also prefer to mix my text and sponsor links in among the thumbs a bit more, so that the thumbs aren't all grouped together. Here's an example of what I mean, although I tend to line everything up in nice tidy rows a little too much, I'm working on that.
http://www.bevyofbabes.com/tgp/vanes...own/indexc.htm
Your galleries aren't bad, but to convert Hun traffic well they need to be a notch above average, especially in the "teen" niche where there is a ton of competition.