Looks okay for the most part....On your gallery pages, you have too many links in your text. You linked each line of text separately, so "Click here for the tour" is actually 3 links, instead of only one. Same thing with the text at the top. I don't know if you'd get rejected for that or not, since it is still one ad.
You might want to work on the title....It sounds like a boobs site, but it's hardcore....Don't know if it would make a difference or not though. I'm sure some of the more knowledgable folks here can tell you.
Good luck with your sites!