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Originally Posted by Doug E
Got me nervous to submit, but what the hell, I'll give you something to do, reject away  |
And thank you for the opportunity
Your blog is coming along nicely, but it needs more time to evolve and grow. Get some more posts in there. Increase you text to sponsor links ratio. Blogs are about chatting-up your prospect, so you'll need to talk more. Also - I don't think it's healthy to say a few lines then hand out a series of FHG links. Disperse those links within the text, commenting on each as you introduce them.
Get a little more content on there and I'll be more than happy to accept it.