I actually kind of liked that template. Not sure I'll change it. I made some changes and ahve been making more changes as it goes. I Like the three column layout. based on that i'm probably going to keep it as is, what needs changing?
As for writing style I think you guys are right. I'm gonna put more flare into it.

We'll see how that goes with the next few updates.
Thanks for all this great feedback.
Kristian, I was going for an unusual site url, name, and concept (something marketable) but I'm realizing its just not there yet if you didnt pick up on it. we'll see what I can change in that direction.
The graphics that are there are temporary until the site starts moving a bit more traffic, then a revamp from a professional direction is due.
