There's no site title
Mouseovers need to be
http://www.herfirsttime.com not Her First Time
The gallery Links aren't clear enough - add and link text "Gallery One" to the thumbs to fix this
The AFF and Imlive ads are just plain blind - thumbs linked to a sponsor won't float anywhere
It scrolls widthways in an 800x600 window
Personally I hate ad rotators, ad servers and click counters - this is not true everywhere though (I'm picky on sponsors that trap surfers - and if I'm unable to see that from the linkcode I'm not listing the site)
That being said - it's far from the worst first attempt at a FS I've ever seen (you ought to see mine)
