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Old 2005-09-19, 03:30 PM   #18
Halfdeck
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Originally Posted by Amy Lockheart
I just finished my site design, and I'm afraid it might look too flashy to be an amateur site, run and built by me. I want to communicate that I'm approachable and "attainable" as was mentioned earlier in this post. Anyone care to give me an opinion on this? My URL is:
http://www.amylockheart.com
Nice looking site The title graphix gives it a glam twist but the site looks like an authentic "amateur" solo site. The cap you wear on one of the tour pages is a nice touch.

I know I'm going off topic, but just a quick couple minor things I noticed is you have the bottom thumbs and side area with live cam schedules that repeat on every tour page which may train visitors to ignore parts of your page that repeat. Also, I like the video in the tour, although it would be also cool to have a short sample video of you looking into the camera talking directly to the visitors. Finally, I'm not sure if the phrase "Fan Club" fits with the "attainable" fantasy you're going for.
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