My opinion:
http://www.netbooty.com/jessicafree/index.htm = here I would use more text for se's and also list maybe another three link lists on the page! alos I'd have an add below the enter/exot links with some more text to get the surfer going!
http://www.netbooty.com/jessicafree/...irgin-main.htm = galleries links I'd make maybe a couple of font sizes bigger to make them more prominent on the page, I'd also use a different size banner at the top and use text beside it to keep the surfer going with his/her imagination! Below the gallery links I would use text along with a banner again!
http://www.netbooty.com/jessicafree/...irgin-gal1.htm = more text again top, middle and bottom I would also remove the flashing gif at the bottom as it hurts the eyes after a while!
http://www.netbooty.com/jessicafree/...irgin-gal2.htm = more text again top, middle and bottom then have a link saying thanks for viewing this free site for more free pictures go here etc link to a hub.
Also on the 2 gallery pages I would link back to the main page for easy access for surfers!