I see you've already fixed the pic sizes...at least the ones I looked at
And Linkster mentioned the js counter, which is an instant decline with me as well.
While you're fixing those blind links, you should remove the word 'young' combined with the word 'teen'. Then later in the same paragraph, you refer to her as a 'tiny girl'. Combining all those terms together is not something you want on your pages.
While I might be a bit more anal about teen sites than some list owners, I'm pretty sure most other owners also refuse to list the sites with the word 'young' and the word 'teen' combined.
Other than that and the other things mentioned in this thread...it's a pretty clean site...and will be listable with the aformentioned tweaks
