1. Google is not slow at indexing sites
2. It's not punctuation
3. Your keywords should not be in first position EVERYwhere.. (unless your a SE spammer)
4. Nobody KNOWS which bit of text Google will pick up. and that will depend on the keywords searched for.
The real reason..
Your page is known to google... -
http://www.google.com/search?q=site:...e=off&filter=0
but.. because..
You lack incoming links to the root index page
You lack content(text) of any sort on that page
The majority of links on the site are sponsor links
.. google is not showing it much love.. (at the moment)
For a domain registered in october... with most of the "content", in templates, in sub-dirs, and not linked to the root. I think you are doing well to have as much indexed as you have.
DD