Hi Dekaz,
Index:
-Yellow text is illegible against dark background.
-Some People Like Writing Like This But It Hurts My Eyes
-"Check out the tour" -- blind.
- "Watch girls with their pussy pumped" ... This site is about BIG ASSES...not pussy.
Main page:
- "You won't find this stuff anywhere else in the web" - Can't prove it, so why say it?
- Make your text scan-friendly. Short bursts. Avoid unformatted, unjustified lengthy paragraphs.
Galleries
- Vid caps/overcompressed tiny thumbs.
- "Join now and access exclusive sites" .. what sites are you talking about?
It's not a horrible start, slap on better looking pics and submit
