[Mr. Blue]

Originally Posted by furrygirl

So, here's the new version of the same gallery: http://www.furrygirl.com/fhg/hibernation.html The text is spaced out between the photos and I made the text link to my site bigger.

That's much much better furrygirl! Only small suggestions, that first sales link "Click Here to visit Furrygirl.com" still seems a little too muted for me. Perhaps its the earth tone coloring of the text that kind of makes it too relaxed of a sales link.

I like the text, I think it would work better on a freesite...it's a little wordy and tgp surfers have the attention span of a gnat in heat. I'm personally wordy as well, so take that suggestion with a grain of salt because I seldom follow that rule myself, lol.

Definitely a nice improvement though and with the larger thumbs in future galleries it'll be clean, simple, and effective.