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It's good that your trying to be different on your site, but it's not working. I am guessing you have all your text in/on graphics so you can have different fonts, but it's quite difficult to read if you can read it, much is bulry or covered over by other images. Hard to explain, but I did'nt want to read it, probably because it was not to clear or because it was over an number of different images. The collage can be a cool idea, but does'nt work here, just looks on the crappy side, probably because the images seem to be too burry or too compressed. To me the text, which is a big part of your selling, should be very crisp and clear. Also the graphics should be very clear. I get an idea where you were trying to go, but dont think it's working in this case. Plus if the images on the tour look bad, what will the surfer think the inside content looks like?
Also since you have all your text in graphic format, your increasing the load time for the surfer, many surfers are still on dial-up. They could be leaving because it takes a while to load.
The join page looks terrible, the images are blurry, stretched and the text is squeezed into a small space on the sides. The join page is one of your last chances to sell the surfer, gotta make it good.
As for the selling, I see you pushing mainly ifriends, nothing wrong with that, but more surfers are being pushed there, it's no wonder your not making many sales for your own site. The biggest reason your not making sales for your own stuff is because your using tickets club, you need a real merchant account, gotta pony up the $750 visa fee, other wise your just wasting your time.
ronnie
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