Hey Krusher...again, welcome
I haven't done free sites in a few months...but I sure do see a lot of em
A lil page by page review...
Entry page...be sure to post up another site for review when you have recips on it. Will be good to get some feedback...make sure your recip tables look okay too
Also, you'll want to make sure you get a title tag on your pages. And your site title should be on the entry page...preferably in the upper half of the page.
That big top banner is sure BIG...it almost 'feels' like a blind link even though it has the name of the site on it...just my perception for some reason. That banner is also HUGE in kb...optimize that thing if you're going to use it...will make for slow loading pages otherwise. And don't be afraid to wrap some juicy text above/below/both on your banner ads
The little button banner in the middle of the page is definitely a blind link. Here's a great thread on blind links;
http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441
Moving on to your main page...
Again, put a title in your metas. And add some enticing text on the page. Surfers these days don't fall for just plain old banners anymore...those days are long gone. Gotta get em warmed up a bit...convince em that site you're advertising will ease the tingly feeling in their loins...hehehe
Gallery one...
Top text link is blind...again read the thread I referenced...should clear it up for ya. Also, all your pages must fit at 800x600 screen res. This gallery is way too wide. Your thumbs need to be optimized...try to get them down to about 5-7k. A couple of the full size images I hit were a little large...not bad though. Try to keep those under 70k at the maximum...preferably about 45-60k. Again, wrap some text above/below those banners...and get some text on the page...warm things up
Oh, and ya did use a title this time...lol...but try sticking some keywords in there..."Horny Guys Sucking Cock"...something along those lines.
Gallery two...
Juice up the title meta. This one fits at 800x600 so good to go there. That bottom text link is way blind.
Last comment...I think your pics were out of order...try to keep them in some logical sequence. Meaning not naked and fucking in one pic...then clothed in the next.
Sorry, that got to be a long fingered review...but you'll be more sucessful at free sites if you get the feedback from the folks here and implement it