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Old 2006-01-25, 11:23 PM   #16
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Wazza
If English is an issue - don't use much of it

Click Here To Join [insert paysite name here]
Click Here To Take The [insert paysite name here] Free Tour
[insert paysite name here] Is Great! Click Here To Check It Out Now

It's when ESL people attempt to write big paragraphs that things start making little or no sense...
That's worth repeating again!

Especially given the recent influx of Roman Maroni submissions, if you keep it short and sweet as Wazza describes...you'll have a much better chance of getting listed. Also, 'usually' you can harvest bits of text from the sponsor tour. I say usually because I've seen some pretty poorly worded sponsor tours too |confused|
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