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Originally Posted by RawAlex
4 lines of linked text on the inside page isn't a good idea. You might want to add a little more unlinked text, and then link the key part or phrase. linking all of the text is unnatural and sort of rubs me wrong.
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Originally Posted by RawAlex
Space the site out a bit as well... it seems a little bit scrunched up. Don't be scared to throw in some extra line feeds and spacers to give things a chance to breathe.
Alex
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I put some more spaces on the main.php do you think the galleries could do with more spaces ?
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Originally Posted by Fonz
It's probably not a good idea to show her topless on the first gallery and completely clothed on the second gallery. It could be that the second gallery uses a different picture set but I'd use that one as gallery 1 and not gallery 2.
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Originally Posted by Fonz
Also on the gallery pages the links to the sponsor didn't look very appealing to me, try to grab the surfer's attention a little more.
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Is that any better ?
Thanks for checking it over guys would help helpful if you did again just to check the changes are better
Wayne