I saw this thread title and I wanted to post "your girlfriend is sleeping with your best friend" or something like that...
I agree with Greenguy on these sites... bad grammar is death on porn sites. If the potential customer is laughing more than getting excited, you aren't selling them anything except a good laugh. You might want to get your free sites designed in a non-english country, but you really need to have the text and content checked and corrected by a real english speaker before you try to sell to them (it is the same reason I don't build german sites... my german sucks!).
Alex
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