[Simon]

Good advice in all the posts here. So I'll just add that you should always think about what else you can do to entice someone with your text. Is she taking off her clothing or slowly stripping off her shirt and pushing her panties down her slim young legs? And if you're going with the French appeal, why not give her a name, maybe something like Angelina, Brigitte, Ursula, Juliete, Chantal, etc. That would help make some of the sentences flow a bit better too.

And remember, if you build good free sites for Link Lists, you can easily wind up with two usable galleries from each free site which can be submitted individually to TGPs/MGPs with not more than some minor alterations.


Simon