Welcome to GG&J goodspirit - it's a great place where you'll learn loads!
Your first site looks like a nice & careful effort, rather like my first freesites long long ago. Well, actually, it was only about 6 months ago.
Once you've addressed the basic things already mentioned you should be fine. Then hopefully you'll start to get much more creative with that text. As you build more you'll start to work out what works for you, and what doesn't.
Feel free to take a look at my list of freesites
here for pointers.
You can see how they've evolved as I've tried different things. The most recent freesites in each category are listed highest, so you can compare how I started to how I do things now.
Good luck, and read & absorb as much as possible!
