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Old 2007-02-22, 04:36 PM   #2
divinegoddess
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Originally Posted by HowlingWulf View Post
Splash/warning page looks sharp and clean.

Main page needs to grab the surfer immediately.

Seeing prices right away could drive off a lot before they even check out the site. I wouldn't put them on the main page.

Have some welcome text at the top with a row of thumbnail shots of your best stuff to grab the surfer's attention.

What's the actual name of the site? I couldnt tell. I do see a banner for www.teencamgirl.be but that doesn't grab me much. I don't even know what the .be extension is.

Try to stand out more from all the other camgirls. Do you have something you particularly like? Lingerie, boots, a certain toy, whatever. Concentrate on that and build yourself a catchphrase. You want something specific and get in the search engines for it. Some type of roleplaying might be good here.

Title has grammatical errors.
Meta description is just a list of keywords.
will prob remove the price tonight, and work a bit on yr ideas :-) you gave me some good tips :-)

thx Anke
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