Valiant effort.. but...
It is too "graphical"
Header is to big - (it's just uneccessary)
Is the free site name/title - "Bondage Queen"? - If so,... that's good...
Index page warning is a little dominant - ?needs to be smaller
Banners need a bit more "sell" text..
and then every other site needs to be vastly different to this one..
As said it's not a bad effort, and some would say it is usable now.... IMO a few tweaks would make if 'GOOD'
DD