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Few things ive noticed. In your text about why they should join you mention your software will get them active quickly, id change that to loose the word software as some surfers are worried about adult sites and the naughty things that the scum webmasters get upto, including malware spyware etc etc. I personally wouldnt use that word but others may not agree.
Also, under that text, put a link to join as thats what you want them to do once theyve read it id guess, as its what the text asks them to do.
Also if your trying to build a comunity site, id loose the thing that says how many people are online, as right now that number is very low. When its builds up brag about it. Its like if your a video site with 10 videos, your not going to brag about that, but your you have 10 thousand you might. IMO.
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