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A few things i noticed were the index page had tons of misspelled words like "barley legal" and "cute little while full back panites".
There isn't much of a tour to get the surfer to really get turned on and want to join. Also the main page with the options on it in the big x pattern, i like the way it looks but it is really hard to read the sections. Especially the "girl girl" and auction ones. The color is too light and blends in. Those things fixed with a tour could really work well. I have had the best luck with tours that show the episodes and whatnot (like couplesseduceteens at topbucks).
Other than those couple things, i like the design and i think you could sell well.
Brad
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